Wednesday, May 25, 2005

Check it out!

I just finished revising a short story I've been working on for quite some time. If you are feeling either bored, curious, or realize you have seven minutes to burn, feel free to check it out here.

Any and all suggestions are always welcomed.

2 comments:

Amber said...

I was lost. In that "good story sucks you in" lost. In that "I have to brew another pot of coffee because my cup went cold because I forgot to drink it because I was wrapped up in the story" lost.

Amichai said...

Jeepers, thanks. I'm sorry about the coffee. Though iced coffee can be great, cold coffee is something just unbareable.